Receive a Professional Story Assessment

If you’re tired of being overwhelmed by the story you should be starting, finishing or publishing, maybe it’s time to get an assessment from a professional writing coach. Wouldn’t you like to get honest feedback to organize your project with simple, manageable goals?

Before investing more time and energy into developing your book or screenplay, it's a good idea to have your story concept evaluated because, as your coach, I will be looking at the big picture. This includes the necessity of having a strong introduction, strong conclusion and slow build of tension and conflict leading to the climax. (This formula works for fiction and nonfiction.) Other areas to be evaluated include the development of rich characters and dialog.

Your Assessment Will Include:

  • Positive feedback regarding your strengths as a writer
  • Solid, concrete ways to improve your story
  • A determination of the content leading to the climax
  • A simple formula to help make your story more exciting
  • A system to create an outline, track your progress and meet your goals
  • Light editing

I will read your story, produce a report and we will talk by phone to discuss how you can develop your book or screenplay and whether it would be of interest to readers/producers. This will help me understand your story concept and your ability and potential as a writer.

Bonuses: Don't Miss This Great Opportunity!

You also will receive a complimentary 30-minute coaching session by phone ($80 value), tips and tools used by the pros and the exclusive Story Climax Formula to help you write exciting fiction and nonfiction.

NOTE: Once you've paid for your assessment (PayPal, upper right corner), contact T.L. Champion to schedule your appointment, or, if you'd prefer, contact her in advance to discuss your project (details below) and whether the assessment is right for you.

Save $100! Normally $499.99
Your Cost $399.99

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Imagine holding your book in your hands! The writers I’ve worked with are publishing, winning awards and being commissioned to create screenplays for Hollywood producers.

Aren't you tired of wondering if your story is good enough? Get the feedback, support and confidence you need to make your story successful. Contact us for a 30-minute complimentary session: This email address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it. or (216) 521-3186. 


  “I worked on my book for years before I found the perfect coach. As a result of
working with T.L. Champion, the ‘writer’s coach,’ I published my first
 book, which has garnered a lot of media attention. Now I’m turning
 it into a screenplay. My next step is Hollywood.”

- Jeff Daniels, author, My Brother the Boxer

“A series of coincidences made me realize I had the makings of a novel. I was
also thinking about hiring a coach, then I met someone at a writer’s
conference who spoke highly of T.L., and I called her right away.
 Now I know why she’s sought after in the writing community.”

-  Stephen Schneider, author